"By the way, can I keep this?" she said, and struck out his whip. The taser met its target and the other whore fell to the ground in a shriek of surprise and pain. Yes! he thought, my chance is now!
He could feel the drug wearing off, and his fingers were beginning to move. He managed to reach into his coat pocket and slowly pulled out a clear liquid sealed inside a small glass vial. He unnotched the cap with his teeth then swallowed the contents. He returned his gaze to Amaya. "An antidote to most poisons. And judging by this whore's appearance, I doubt she'd have anything out of the ordinary." He could feel the liquid running its course through his body, burning in his stomach and veins as it went along. The feeling slowly returned to his limbs, and he let out a grunt of satisfaction. No common whore could subdue the greatest thief in Republic City.
He stood up, still shaky, though mobile. He walked past Amaya and smiled at the whore on the ground. Her body was numb from the shock, but her eyes still looked at him with the same cold stare they had before Amaya bursted in. Something else was there too; a glimmer of fear flashed across his face, and Renori's face broke out in a wicked grin. "I told you I'd kill you," he said quietly.
He took his dagger from inside his cloak and grabbed the woman's hair. He tilted her head back, exposing her neck, then ran his dagger through her soft flesh. A wave of blood, warm and crimson, cascaded from her neck and shot out around the room. Amaya was covered in the woman's blood, as was Renori. A dark red pool began to form underneath the whore as she spit out nasty sounds of choking and gagging. Renori let her go, and he body fell limply to the floor. He resheathed his dagger.
"I suppose I ought to thank you," he said to Amaya, and he walked over to where she was standing. Their faces were an inch away now, and Renori could feel her breath on his face. He was growing hard, and he wanted nothing in the world that moment more than to take her right there in the spreading pool of blood. He took hold of her face with one hand, and with his other he held her arm. He leaned in to kiss her.
[EDIT: OoC- dun kill meh pleh]