Wolfie's poems

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Wolfie's poems

Postby Paradox Revealed » Fri Sep 19, 2008 3:25 pm

These poems were created by yours truly. Some are haikus, some aren't.

This first one here, for example isn't, but I hope you enjoy it.

The Flaming Rooftop
Atop the flaming rooftop
Scarlet fire surrounds
Two young boys,
One adventure bound.
The friends lock eyes
At one another.
One tries to say his byes
Instead gets ready for battle.
Sozin and Roku of the Fire Nation.
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Postby Kiara » Fri Sep 19, 2008 5:17 pm

I like it! :)
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Postby Paradox Revealed » Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:25 pm


Kiara wrote:I like it! :)

Thanks. I'm currently working on some others, I guess a couple of character descriptions like Rooftop.
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Postby scarletcougar » Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:17 pm

great poem! I like how it developed and the descriptions with the notation as to who the characters were at the end. I would love to see more about other characters.
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Postby Renori Fa » Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:30 pm

I liked it a lot as well.

Haiku's are the only poems that I like
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